You guys don't have to like it, and I'm not to sure about it myself but it was just one of my first ideas. ok here it is. In the world of many possiblities there are 4 seals. these seals are suppose to be unknown but turns out someone must know because who ever it is is trying to open them. which would be really bad because even though the 4 seals are  placed in different places of the world they carry the most strongest hell monsters ever and that will not maybe but will bring world destruction. These monsters are known as THE BASILISK (the basilisk is the king of serpents,a mighty crown of horns upon its head.any contact with one what so ever brings death.It's glare disintegrates bone;it's spit boils fleash;it's breath brings decay to all things living; and any area it inhabits quickly transforms into a barren desert.) But because these Basilisks have been seal for so long they only have one of these gifts, to get the others they have to at least kill 500 people including 6 god gifted people which they will most likey do if they get free. Now this is where Kyo comes in(just named him so I could explane to you guys) he is the son of a angel and a priestess. their love was forbidden because first of all she's human and second of all they were in the same line of work,protecting the seals. When his mother dieds because one basilisk was freed his father comes to him and asks him to make sure the others don't get open.what makes kyo strong so is the fact that he is a unusal mixture therefore he has powers beyond his father and mother. This is where Max comes in (just named to help explane) She a up spoken girl with a kind heart and ends up traveling with kyo going up against countless demons and things that suppose to hold them off while this nameless guy trys to open the seals. On their journey they meet powerful people who can help them out. a group forms. What they all don't know is that two of the basilisks were the strongest out of the 4 they both was sealed but into what? One was sealed into a guy and one a girl, a girl who just so happens to have no memory and the name  max. so what you guys think? write me.  

Hmmm...interesting...complicated storyline already, but some of the best usually have that.

I'll have to come back and read through it again later when I can use a little more brain power to twist everything inside out so it makes sense in my weird brain. Interesting start, though...

I think it's good for a start.

Just so I'm clear one of the strongest Basilisks was Sealed into Max, the girl, but she doesn't know it, right?

 Like I said, it's a good start. I think you should develop it further now. Fill in the blanks, you know? Like, where did the Basilisks come from? Why were they Sealed up? Can anyone defeat them ( assuming he/she is strong enough ) or do you need to get a special ability first? How do you get the ability/what is it ( if you need one )? Where are the other two Basilisks sealed ( the ones NOT in people )? Are they sealed in Temples, built specifically for that purpose, or are they sealed in Objects? You know, stuff like that.

One thing: When writing a large piece of information, if you break your text into smaller, managable paragraphs its easier for your readers to follow along.

 I would have to agree with mangabrary. Its interesting but needs further development.

 I would also recommend that you be very careful not to make it generic. The storyline you've chosen has many elements that have been used by many others. which isn't a bad thing, why fix it if its not broken? But you need to be extra careful not to have it become too cliche.

You may wish to consider how to put a unique twist on it, something that hasn't necessarily been done before.

Be sure to have really fleshed-out characters. Give them lots of personality! Unique and colourful characters can really carry a story.  

Thanks to the approval SomikinRose I have posted my story idea as well

 Here is the twist the soul in this girl is that of the angel's lover's twin sister who really did love the angel (The woman he did love was just using him) and she was reincarnated as a daemon who serves and is the lover of the angel that exposed the relationship and made the main character fallen in the first place, and even though he is still a high racked angel he is actually working with the side of evil to make the throne of heaven his. What no one except the almighty on the current holder of the throne of heaven knows is that this fallen angel is actually his most powerful angel who lost his memories except those of his affair with the human woman when he became a fallen. But is this part of his punishment or is their another reason why he can’t remember everything?

@ Mahjongg: "Wayward Angel" sounds interesting...convoluted with a few points nagging at my brain that I've seen before, but interesting.

Quick question: If the soul in the girl right now was reincarnated as a daemon before she came into this girl, are we assuming that she died of some cause before her sister's affair with the fallen angel ended in time to be born again as a daemon who helped end it and then died again to be reborn into the current girl? Yeah, everything always sounds more confusing when I try to say it...

I'm going to have to come back and read it again so I can get a further understanding of it but Its real interesting.

Do you have the whole story figured out and or typed out or if that just a breif summary of what you want?

Are you going to add more to it or is some one else cause i think you should add more your self it would be much better that was, I love it Just develop it more and i'd be speachless in words to deicribe your work.

Girl you have a gift!

The story was very interesting and since i started reading it i couldn't stop, you should try to turn it into a manga or anime (or normal book, if you can't do the other two options...)

There's one thing i thought you exagerated a little bit, the fact that the basilisks kill everything in it's way (that wouldn't work cause there wouldn't be anyone alive to witness it's existence.... lol)

And the bad guys (the ones trying to open the seals) you should tell more about them cause it only says that they are searching for the seals... i wanna know more about them!! :)

but until now you've done a great job (loved it!) and i thought that Max was a good name for the girl (even thought it was just for us to understand... )